What could be improved in our title sequence?

• One of the things that i think should be improved on in our title sequence is the sound. The sound could have had more levels of loudness and quietness for example in the scene where Shaniqua is throwing Liam's book, the sound of the beat would've quieten down so that we can hear how harsh the book has been thrown. Small things like this could create a huge impact and allowed the audience to feel emotion.

• Another thing which could've been improved on in the opening sequence are the title credits. Some of the title credits transition on one shot to another. It would look more professional if the title credit just stayed on one shot.